We have been writing factual descriptions about toys and games so Dev decided to write all about Animal Jam at home. He has clearly worked very hard and put a lot of effort into his home learning - well done Dev.
Dev this presentation is very impressive! What a fantastic example of home learning. You have described Animal Jam very well. You have also convinced me that this is a good game to use in class during Golden Time because you are clearly learning about good digital citizenship!
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Dev this presentation is very impressive! What a fantastic example of home learning. You have described Animal Jam very well. You have also convinced me that this is a good game to use in class during Golden Time because you are clearly learning about good digital citizenship!
good job dev that was a nice description about animal jam.you put lots of intristing sentences.that was a very very good description.well done!
wow! dev i now know about animal jam! you told like a instruction manual!
Wow Dev! You have been a superstar at Writing!
can u be my friend in animal jam dev nice work too
thanks everyone for commenting me nice stuff I really appreciate it
well done dev good desption about animal jam you just told how to play animal jam
It was like the biggest instruction manual and the coolest computer game ever.
nice story
great job Dev on animal jam this is soo cool.
Good Job Dev! You have explained what Animal Jam is and what you can do on it!!
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